posted by cgjohnson at 5:38 PM
i really like this haiku.. tho the first time i read it, i thought it said a sea of feces. i like your version better. its cool to look back through these and see your improvement, not that you were bad in the first place.look forward to your next poem. :-)
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i really like this haiku.. tho the first time i read it, i thought it said a sea of feces. i like your version better. its cool to look back through these and see your improvement, not that you were bad in the first place.
look forward to your next poem. :-)
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