Wednesday, October 11, 2006

The rock that tripped me

The rock that tripped me
Saved my life. Unwitting dodge
Of an evil glare.

3 Comments:

Blogger Aaron Sacco said...

What's this about?

10:46 AM  
Blogger cgjohnson said...

I don't know. And I'm not really happy with it. I meant to generically describe a situation where something unpleasant turns out to be a good thing, but then the last line seemed to introduce a different element all together. I wasn't happy with sticking to the first theme, but I didn't know what to make of the second, so I left it. I'll probably back off and try to approach the situation from a different direction.

3:05 PM  
Blogger Aaron Sacco said...

Oh, you're being to hard on yourself! I think sometimes you may write things that can only be explained on a subconscious level. You may not know what made you write it, but it just just felt right at that moment. It may strike a cord with someone else perfectly, and be the exact thing they need to hear at another moment.

I love subjective meaning. I think it makes a piece of art, whether it be poetry or painting, become a "means" rather than an "end." They make the participant use their own imagination to find meaning in themselves. Sometimes I do pieces of art that seem pointless or barren, but for some reason at the moment I was doing it, it felt right, and it needed to be finished and left alone.

Some words may need no logical explanation. Keep up the good work!

10:05 AM  

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